Tuesday, October 16, 2018

My amazing descriptive writing




WALT: Write a descriptive piece of writing

It was time the day had come to check my cast.


Eyes wide open as my name gets called out I shake and sigh.My heart pounds as fast as thunder I didn’t know what was going to happen.I breathe faster and faster in each step.As I cling to dad I look around slowly and stop.People look as I walk as slow as a snail

I was hoping for good news. didn’t want my cast to get changed.

I struggled to put a introduction but I thought I did well.



Tuesday, July 31, 2018



WALT:write show and tell

The clothes was scattered across the floor with a three week old pizza.The carpet is no longer there as my clothes takes over.Avoiding the rubbish I hoped over my dirty socks.As I smell the rotten air. It made me struggle to keep my eyes open . As I try to walk out I walk into a mountain of blankets as big as mt everest.


Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Descriptive writing

WALT:write descriptive writing

As I popped up I taste the salty bubbly,aerated, foamy water.
My feet just landed on the sticky slippery surfboard.
I smell the wet seaweed. it smells as bad as dirty rubbish.
As I stuck my head up   I stopped for a minute as I smiled my face is aching.
I feel like my face is splitting apart.

Wednesday, June 27, 2018

This is my imaginary planet information report

Imaginary Planet Information Report

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

Topic sentence
Candy Cove is outside the Milky Way.
it looks like a rainbow and it smells unique and has many different problems than Earth. It is bigger than any planet in the Milky Way.

Appearance
Keywords
Rainbow sour string
Tree trunks candy canes
gummies leafs
Ponds rivers made of fizzy
Ice cream rocks
Clouds made of candy floss
Biggest in the milk way.
Chocolate fish
Lemon Lime grass
Candy cave
Floating stars
Gingerbread house
Chocolate water park
Candy vehicles
Candy wishing well
Candy aliens



Topic sentence


Candy Cove is unlike most other planets.
There are tree trunks made out of candy canes.
Candy cove also has gummy leafs.
It has ponds and rivers made out of different kinds and flavours of fizzy.
Also Candy cove has ice cream rocks.
Candy cove has chocolate fish.
It as lemon and lime grass.
Candy cove has candy caves.
Candy cove has gingerbread houses
It has extraordinary rainbow sour strings for ropes.
Candy cove has sparkling candy stars.
It has a chocolate water park.
Candy cove has different types and flavours of vehicle.
It has candy wishing wells.
Candy cove has millions candy aliens.

Smells
Keywords
Smell
Apples
Different kinds of candy
Pears
Berries
Topic sentence
Candy cove has delicious smells
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.
When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.


Topic sentence


Candy cove has delicious smells

Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.


When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.

Problems
Keywords
Sugar rush
Teeth will rot
People might eat there cars
There is too much candy and people will get sick
People eat everything and there will be nothing left
There will have to be a limit
Topic sentence
Candy cove has bizarre problems
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
People at candy cove will get sugar rush.
At candy cove peoples teeth will rot.
The cars will be made of candy and people will eat there cars
There will be to much candy and people might get sick.
There will have to be a limit.
People eat everything there and there will be nothing left.

Apollo 11 time line

  This is my timeline for Apollo 11

Tuesday, May 1, 2018

Information report

We are learning about space and we were reading a book about the sun.






Tuesday, April 10, 2018

My Dlo

 
I am learning to jump through a tidy number on a number line to solve problems like 17+  =91



Wednesday, April 4, 2018

Unbelievable Facts about Sophie Pascoe











Unbelievable
Facts about Sophie Pascoe
I enjoyed finding facts about Sophie Pascoe.
I found it challenging to find some the facts because we
had a time limit.

Sophie Pascoe was born in Christchurch on January the
8 1993  in New Zealand .
Sophie Pascoe was accidently  ran over by her dad on a
ride on lawn mower.
Sophie Pascoe has a older sister named Rebecca Pascoe
Sophie Pascoes middle name in Sophie Frances Pascoe.
Sophie Pascoe is 25 years old.Sophie Pascoe’s parents are
Jo Pascoe that is her mum and her dad is Garry Pascoe.
In March 2013 Sophie Pascoe broke her own world record
for the 50m butterfly at the New Zealand swimming
championships in Auckland setting a time of 29.21 seconds.


Tuesday, March 27, 2018

Waking up

We are learning to right a descriptive piece of writing about waking up in the morning and we had to write ideas down and this is my piece of writing hope you like it.

Sunshine sneaks through my curtains  and then the darkness fades away but it is still a little bit dark  in my bedroom.I feel so relaxed my body looks like a ball. Then I see my dog on me and he is licking my face and it feels like someone is splashing me.There are pots and pans banging and I whispered to myself ” is dad making breakfast”? Also I think  dad is stoking the fire. I’m talking to my dog and said is it Saturday? But of course he didn’t answer because he is a dog. I tried to go back to sleep and I rolled to far and almost fell out of bed. I am feeling so scared. The birds are chirping I felt like I was in wonderland.Then I through my blankets off and I was as energetic as a cheetah. By Autumn

Friday, March 2, 2018

Society

I found out what society means it means a group of people.