My amazing descriptive writing

WALT: Write a descriptive piece of writing

It was time the day had come to check my cast.


Eyes wide open as my name gets called out I shake and sigh.My heart pounds as fast as thunder I didn’t know what was going to happen.I breathe faster and faster in each step.As I cling to dad I look around slowly and stop.People look as I walk as slow as a snail

I was hoping for good news. didn’t want my cast to get changed.

I struggled to put a introduction but I thought I did well.