WALT:write descriptive writing
As I popped up I taste the salty bubbly,aerated, foamy water.
My feet just landed on the sticky slippery surfboard.
I smell the wet seaweed. it smells as bad as dirty rubbish.
As I stuck my head up I stopped for a minute as I smiled my face is aching.
I feel like my face is splitting apart.
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