Imaginary Planet Information Report
Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.
Topic sentence
Candy Cove is outside the Milky Way.
it looks like a rainbow and it smells unique and has many different problems than Earth. It is bigger than any planet in the Milky Way.
Appearance
Keywords
Rainbow sour string
Tree trunks candy canes
gummies leafs
Ponds rivers made of fizzy
Ice cream rocks
Clouds made of candy floss
Biggest in the milk way.
Chocolate fish
Lemon Lime grass
Candy cave
Floating stars
Gingerbread house
Chocolate water park
Candy vehicles
Candy wishing well
Candy aliens
Topic sentence
Candy Cove is unlike most other planets.
There are tree trunks made out of candy canes.
Candy cove also has gummy leafs.
It has ponds and rivers made out of different kinds and flavours of fizzy.
Also Candy cove has ice cream rocks.
Candy cove has chocolate fish.
It as lemon and lime grass.
Candy cove has candy caves.
Candy cove has gingerbread houses
It has extraordinary rainbow sour strings for ropes.
Candy cove has sparkling candy stars.
It has a chocolate water park.
Candy cove has different types and flavours of vehicle.
It has candy wishing wells.
Candy cove has millions candy aliens.
Smells
Keywords
Smell
Apples
Different kinds of candy
Pears
Berries
Topic sentence
Candy cove has delicious smells
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.
When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.
Topic sentence
Candy cove has delicious smells
Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.
When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.
Problems
Keywords
Sugar rush
Teeth will rot
People might eat there cars
There is too much candy and people will get sick
People eat everything and there will be nothing left
There will have to be a limit
Topic sentence
Candy cove has bizarre problems
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
People at candy cove will get sugar rush.
At candy cove peoples teeth will rot.
The cars will be made of candy and people will eat there cars
There will be to much candy and people might get sick.
There will have to be a limit.
People eat everything there and there will be nothing left.
Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.
Topic sentence
Candy Cove is outside the Milky Way.
it looks like a rainbow and it smells unique and has many different problems than Earth. It is bigger than any planet in the Milky Way.
Appearance
Keywords
Rainbow sour string
Tree trunks candy canes
gummies leafs
Ponds rivers made of fizzy
Ice cream rocks
Clouds made of candy floss
Biggest in the milk way.
Chocolate fish
Lemon Lime grass
Candy cave
Floating stars
Gingerbread house
Chocolate water park
Candy vehicles
Candy wishing well
Candy aliens
Topic sentence
Candy Cove is unlike most other planets.
There are tree trunks made out of candy canes.
Candy cove also has gummy leafs.
It has ponds and rivers made out of different kinds and flavours of fizzy.
Also Candy cove has ice cream rocks.
Candy cove has chocolate fish.
It as lemon and lime grass.
Candy cove has candy caves.
Candy cove has gingerbread houses
It has extraordinary rainbow sour strings for ropes.
Candy cove has sparkling candy stars.
It has a chocolate water park.
Candy cove has different types and flavours of vehicle.
It has candy wishing wells.
Candy cove has millions candy aliens.
Smells
Keywords
Smell
Apples
Different kinds of candy
Pears
Berries
Topic sentence
Candy cove has delicious smells
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.
When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.
Topic sentence
Candy cove has delicious smells
Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.
When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.
Problems
Keywords
Sugar rush
Teeth will rot
People might eat there cars
There is too much candy and people will get sick
People eat everything and there will be nothing left
There will have to be a limit
Topic sentence
Candy cove has bizarre problems
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
People at candy cove will get sugar rush.
At candy cove peoples teeth will rot.
The cars will be made of candy and people will eat there cars
There will be to much candy and people might get sick.
There will have to be a limit.
People eat everything there and there will be nothing left.
