WALT:write show and tell

The clothes was scattered across the floor with a three week old pizza.The carpet is no longer there as my clothes takes over.Avoiding the rubbish I hoped over my dirty socks.As I smell the rotten air. It made me struggle to keep my eyes open . As I try to walk out I walk into a mountain of blankets as big as mt everest.

Descriptive writing

WALT:write descriptive writing

As I popped up I taste the salty bubbly,aerated, foamy water.

My feet just landed on the sticky slippery surfboard.

I smell the wet seaweed. it smells as bad as dirty rubbish.

As I stuck my head up   I stopped for a minute as I smiled my face is aching.

I feel like my face is splitting apart.