Wednesday, June 27, 2018

This is my imaginary planet information report

Imaginary Planet Information Report

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

Topic sentence
Candy Cove is outside the Milky Way.
it looks like a rainbow and it smells unique and has many different problems than Earth. It is bigger than any planet in the Milky Way.

Appearance
Keywords
Rainbow sour string
Tree trunks candy canes
gummies leafs
Ponds rivers made of fizzy
Ice cream rocks
Clouds made of candy floss
Biggest in the milk way.
Chocolate fish
Lemon Lime grass
Candy cave
Floating stars
Gingerbread house
Chocolate water park
Candy vehicles
Candy wishing well
Candy aliens



Topic sentence


Candy Cove is unlike most other planets.
There are tree trunks made out of candy canes.
Candy cove also has gummy leafs.
It has ponds and rivers made out of different kinds and flavours of fizzy.
Also Candy cove has ice cream rocks.
Candy cove has chocolate fish.
It as lemon and lime grass.
Candy cove has candy caves.
Candy cove has gingerbread houses
It has extraordinary rainbow sour strings for ropes.
Candy cove has sparkling candy stars.
It has a chocolate water park.
Candy cove has different types and flavours of vehicle.
It has candy wishing wells.
Candy cove has millions candy aliens.













Smells



Keywords


Smell


Apples


Different kinds of candy


Pears


Berries



Topic sentence


Candy cove has delicious smells



Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.


When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.





Smells



Keywords


Smell


Apples


Different kinds of candy


Pears


Berries



Topic sentence


Candy cove has delicious smells

Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.


When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.

















Problems



Keywords


Sugar rush


Teeth will rot


People might eat there cars


There is too much candy and people will get sick


People eat everything and there will be nothing left


There will have to be a limit





Topic sentence


Candy cove has bizarre problems



Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


People at candy cove will get sugar rush.


At candy cove peoples teeth will rot.


The cars will be made of candy and people will eat there cars


There will be to much candy and people might get sick.


There will have to be a limit.


People eat everything there and there will be nothing left.



Concluding sentence






















Smells



Keywords


Smell


Apples


Different kinds of candy


Pears


Berries



Topic sentence


Candy cove has delicious smells



Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.


When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.



Concluding sentence

























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