Wednesday, June 27, 2018

This is my imaginary planet information report

Imaginary Planet Information Report

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

Topic sentence
Candy Cove is outside the Milky Way.
it looks like a rainbow and it smells unique and has many different problems than Earth. It is bigger than any planet in the Milky Way.

Appearance
Keywords
Rainbow sour string
Tree trunks candy canes
gummies leafs
Ponds rivers made of fizzy
Ice cream rocks
Clouds made of candy floss
Biggest in the milk way.
Chocolate fish
Lemon Lime grass
Candy cave
Floating stars
Gingerbread house
Chocolate water park
Candy vehicles
Candy wishing well
Candy aliens



Topic sentence


Candy Cove is unlike most other planets.
There are tree trunks made out of candy canes.
Candy cove also has gummy leafs.
It has ponds and rivers made out of different kinds and flavours of fizzy.
Also Candy cove has ice cream rocks.
Candy cove has chocolate fish.
It as lemon and lime grass.
Candy cove has candy caves.
Candy cove has gingerbread houses
It has extraordinary rainbow sour strings for ropes.
Candy cove has sparkling candy stars.
It has a chocolate water park.
Candy cove has different types and flavours of vehicle.
It has candy wishing wells.
Candy cove has millions candy aliens.













Smells



Keywords


Smell


Apples


Different kinds of candy


Pears


Berries



Topic sentence


Candy cove has delicious smells



Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.


When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.





Smells



Keywords


Smell


Apples


Different kinds of candy


Pears


Berries



Topic sentence


Candy cove has delicious smells

Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.


When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.

















Problems



Keywords


Sugar rush


Teeth will rot


People might eat there cars


There is too much candy and people will get sick


People eat everything and there will be nothing left


There will have to be a limit





Topic sentence


Candy cove has bizarre problems



Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


People at candy cove will get sugar rush.


At candy cove peoples teeth will rot.


The cars will be made of candy and people will eat there cars


There will be to much candy and people might get sick.


There will have to be a limit.


People eat everything there and there will be nothing left.



Concluding sentence






















Smells



Keywords


Smell


Apples


Different kinds of candy


Pears


Berries



Topic sentence


Candy cove has delicious smells



Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


Candy cove has a delicious berry smell.


When you are at candy cove it smells like every single different piece of candy you can dream of. When you get there the fruit candy smells like pears.



Concluding sentence

























Apollo 11 time line

  This is my timeline for Apollo 11

Tuesday, May 1, 2018

Information report

We are learning about space and we were reading a book about the sun.











Tuesday, April 10, 2018

My Dlo

 
I am learning to jump through a tidy number on a number line to solve problems like 17+  =91



Wednesday, April 4, 2018

Facts about Sophie Pascoe




We are learning to find information by skimming
and scanning.

Facts about Sophie Pascoe
Sophie Pascoe was born in Christchurch on January the
8 1993  in New Zealand .
Sophie Pascoe was accidently  ran over by her dad on a
ride on lawn mower.
Sophie Pascoe has a older sister named Rebecca Pascoe
Sophie Pascoes middle name in Sophie Frances Pascoe.
Sophie Pascoe is 25 years old.Sophie Pascoe’s parents are
Jo Pascoe that is her mum and her dad is Garry Pascoe.
In March 2013 Sophie Pascoe broke her own world record
for the 50m butterfly at the New Zealand swimming
championships in Auckland setting a time of 29.21 seconds.


Tuesday, March 27, 2018

Waking up

We are learning to right a descriptive piece of writing about waking up in the morning and we had to write ideas down and this is my piece of writing hope you like it.

Sunshine sneaks through my curtains  and then the darkness fades away but it is still a little bit dark  in my bedroom.I feel so relaxed my body looks like a ball. Then I see my dog on me and he is licking my face and it feels like someone is splashing me.There are pots and pans banging and I whispered to myself ” is dad making breakfast”? Also I think  dad is stoking the fire. I’m talking to my dog and said is it Saturday? But of course he didn’t answer because he is a dog. I tried to go back to sleep and I rolled to far and almost fell out of bed. I am feeling so scared. The birds are  chirping I felt like I was in wonderland.Then I through my blankets off and I was as energetic as a cheetah. By Autumn

Friday, March 2, 2018

Society

I found out what society means it means a group of people.