Wednesday, February 27, 2019

This is amazing and so fun.We had to make a acrostic poem about
persuasive writing.

Have you ever done a acrostic poem?

ACROSTIC POEM - PERSUASIVE


Personal opinion - use your personal opinion  
Explaining what you are writing about
Reasons why you think you should
Something that you agree or disagree with
Understanding the topic
Amazing -  your point should sound amazing
Strong point - making your point sound better
Interesting - you’re making your reader want to read more
Vertifying - making sure it is true or not

Edit - make it sound better

Monday, February 25, 2019

Amazing Super Sheets

Wow! This is awesome I love google spreadsheets. Google sheets are so fun and easy. We learn't how to use  google sheets to make graphs about  the number of animals and children. Once I had collected all the data, I copied it to a spreadsheet and clicked on the bar graph button to get my graphs. Have you ever made graphs before?
Here is a Link to my slideshow

Have you ever used google spreadsheets before


Here are my Graphs


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Tuesday, December 11, 2018

Theatre Royal singing

Theatre Royal Monday 10.12.18




Yesterday Kumara School went to the Theatre Royal to sing christmas songs to the elderly and some parents. We did it because they like to hear us sing.This year the whole school went to sing last year it was only Room one.

We walked down at 12 o'clock we got buddied up my buddy was Kaylee.It was a Joyful walk a couple people fell over.We all walked in a line.



As I stepped into the pub my heart raced. We put our hats on and we walk around the corner. A whole table of people started clapping my face goes red. After the rest of the lines come we start singing at the end the crowd went wild it was like were are a rugby team scoring a goal. A huge smile runs through the crowd.

We sung 10 songs but it was worth it.

Friday, November 30, 2018

Room 1 Camp





Bang! Crash! As I on the paddle board I feel the water hit me. I feel alive.The only thing that is going through my head is how refreshing the water will be. Splash! I fall in. A gigantic smile runs through my face.


I feel refreshed. As the salty aerated water runs down my throat I gag. I see the slimy,green rocks at the bottom of the water.I hear people yell in the distance. It was an exhilarating experience.




Tuesday, October 16, 2018

My amazing descriptive writing




WALT: Write a descriptive piece of writing

It was time the day had come to check my cast.


Eyes wide open as my name gets called out I shake and sigh.My heart pounds as fast as thunder I didn’t know what was going to happen.I breathe faster and faster in each step.As I cling to dad I look around slowly and stop.People look as I walk as slow as a snail

I was hoping for good news. didn’t want my cast to get changed.

I struggled to put a introduction but I thought I did well.



Tuesday, July 31, 2018



WALT:write show and tell

The clothes was scattered across the floor with a three week old pizza.The carpet is no longer there as my clothes takes over.Avoiding the rubbish I hoped over my dirty socks.As I smell the rotten air. It made me struggle to keep my eyes open . As I try to walk out I walk into a mountain of blankets as big as mt everest.