Wednesday, May 3, 2017

BAD DAY AT THE WATER SLIDE

Whoosh!  That is all I hear when I go down. I scream in fear  although I have been down before.  All of a sudden I look back and see my dad. Am I halfway there now? It gets faster and faster.  
‘Dad’ I shout ‘is it going fast?’
but dad said ‘it isn't’
‘argh’.
All of a sudden I drop in the pool. I got water up my nose. How would you feel?
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1 comment:

  1. Hi Autumn if i got water up my nose it would be a little bit sore but every time i go to the pools i get water up my nose to.and i love the pictuer you have but to describe your writing. keep it up

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