Hi Autumn! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! I loved your story so much it was really interesting. I liked the way you made some of the text bigger and bolder to create an interesting effect to your story.
I have done something similar to this, I remember that some ideas were that the wolf had asthma. What was your favorite part of writing this story?
Maybe you could add in some descriptive language into your story, like similes, metaphors, personification etc... it would make your story even more interesting to read.
Hi Autumn! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! I loved your story so much it was really interesting. I liked the way you made some of the text bigger and bolder to create an interesting effect to your story.
ReplyDeleteI have done something similar to this, I remember that some ideas were that the wolf had asthma. What was your favorite part of writing this story?
Maybe you could add in some descriptive language into your story, like similes, metaphors, personification etc... it would make your story even more interesting to read.
I look forward to more posts!
Mia